Color experiments, I hate colors but since I had to do it; here are my five trials with one composition…
My A3 and A4 refinements:
This was my refined A4, while I was doing this I was thinking if I should use kashida on the word البالون to emphasize that the balloon is ‘shoving’ the noodles since my sentence has this meaning, but if I wanted to use kashida I want it to be long and pushing the word بحنان (tenderly) off, and align على with قريبا . But i thought that it would be so much kashida so I didn’t do it.
In class Law and Leland suggested the same things I was afraid to do, since they said it’s okay I went and made the changes.
Things I changed:
- I used kashida making sure that it’s long enough to align the words على and قريبا.
- I didn’t align the second part of the sentence with the first one properly although the boxes were aligned.
- The second line looked like it was aligned but I had to move the word الجريء slightly to the left to make it look like it’s perfectly aligned, “optical illusions”.
- The last thing was to make the last part of the sentence the same size, because at this point and with all the little changes I made, it looked better that way.